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She can see all the things
She'd rather be
Up in the tree
With broken wings

She watched it all
Fall apart
An empty heart
Shattered wall

Torn and broken
Her whole life
With one knife
She was stolen

There was a small light
Falling from the sky
From up so high
With all its might

Crashing down
Bleeding cold
Her beauty sold
Her body marred

Forever numb
She feels no more
From before
She cannot become

So now she stares
At all the things
She'd rather be
Up in the tree
With broken wings
Another spontaneous poem XD idk if it's any good or not. Tell me what you think :3

I do not own the image! Only the writing!
Image found: [link] and here: [link]
Original artist: :iconswarzeztier:
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havoc-rein91 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Artist
Wow. Excellent.
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :heart:
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Hawk-tip Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*takes broken wings and learns to fly again and learns to live so free*
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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SwarzezTier Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Could you please link my image you used on top to the original here? Or is it usal that way here on dA (do not know much about this, just saw my drawing here ;-) )
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I gave you full credit in the description, but if you want i will of course remove it :)
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh gosh this is yours??? I only google searched the image. I hope it's okay I still use it, i'll of course leave a link and all credit to you! I got it from a tumblr page here [link]
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SwarzezTier Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Yes some people use it for what they want outside dA and i could not do much against it..
But thank you for the credit and the poem explaining it :-)
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anniefelis Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
On DA people ignore the rules and take what they want without caring, and usually the staff does little about it unless the original artist makes a fuss. It sucks. She's not supposed to use this image without your permission.
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I usually just google search images and sometimes the artist or others know the original creator, and whenever that happens I credit them, like i just did here. But if they ever contact me wanting to remove it I of course do so. :)
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