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7 Minutes of Heaven


"OMIGOSH! YOU KNOW WHAT WOULD BE SUPER FUNTASTIC?!?" Patty giggled excitedly  as everyone turned to look at her. "A SLEEPOVER!!! HAHAHA!"

Oh boy…

"Hey, that's a great idea, Patty!" Liz told her.

"It could be fun…," Tsubaki added

"Yeah," Maka suggested, not sure what to think of it.

"OMIGOSH! It would be so much fun if we invited all the boys too!" Patty added, giggling over herself.

Ooooooh boy…

"Another great idea!" Liz exclaimed.

"Good idea," Tsubaki added.

Maka huffed.

"What's the matter, Maka? Scared of playing Truth or Dare?" Liz asked as she nudged her as Patty giggled even louder.

"NO! I'm not scared of a little game!" Maka said, frustrated.

"Alright then. How does Friday night sound?" Liz asked.

"Sounds AMAZINGGGG!" Patty giggled.

"Sure!" Tsubaki said.

Maka huffed again.

"Oh, but wait! "Where are we gonna have it at?" Tsubaki asked.

"Hmmm… I dunno," Liz though.

"BlackStar and my place is a bit small. I don't think it's a good idea," Tsubaki said.

"Right… I don't think Lord Death would like all those kids over his house… or Kid for that matter… We might mess something up… Why not your place, Maka?" Liz asked.

"WHAT? Why?!?" Maka yelped.

"Why not?" Patty giggled, barely paying attention.

"Well… uh… um…" Maka stuttered.

"What? Did you have something special planned for Soul that night?" Liz asked, eyeing Maka.

"NO OF COURSE NOT!" Maka blasted, her face flaring red.

"Well then! It's settled. It'll be at Maka's place. Let's tell everyone after school today," Liz suggested.

"Alright then," Tsubaki said with a smile. Then they all continued to eat their lunches and Maka ate her's angrily.

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"Hey, Soul," Maka called as she sat on her bed.

"Yeah?" he answered from the living room.

"Everyone's coming over on Friday for a sleepover," she yelled to him.

"What? Serious?" he asked, surprised.

"Sadly, yes," she answered.

"Whatever," he said coolly.

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Friday Night


Everyone made their way into Maka and Soul's apartment, making themselves at home as the sky started to turn dark and the small room grew quite loud. Once everyone was settled
they all decided on what activity they should do.

"Truth or dare! Truth or dare!" Patty giggled and all the girls agreed.

"Ugh man! That's such a girl game!" BlackStar complained.

"No it's not! No it's not!" Patty giggled.

"I'll go first!" Tsubaki said. "Maka, truth or dare?" she questioned Maka.

"Truth," she said and everyone groaned.

"Chicken!" BlackStar yelled.

"Shut up!" she yelled back.

"Okay, is it true… you like Soul?" she asked, raising an eyebrow.

"Of course I like him, he's my partner," she said blowing the question off. Everyone sighed. Soul looked away.

"BlackStar, truth or dare?"

"DARE MAN!"

"I dare you to go run around outside with only your underwear on," Maka told him, tasting revenge.

"HELL NO!"

"CHICKEN!"

"FINE! I, THE GREAT, BLACKSTAR, WILL CONQUER THIS DARE! Oh, and just so you guys know, I HATE YOU ALL!" BlackStar yelled a blood curtling scream. Everyone laughed as he actually did it.

"Kid, truth or dare?"

"Dare… I'm a symmetrical man, aren't I?" Kid said, a smile shining on his face.

"I dare you to turn one of your pant pockets inside out!" BlackStar yelled at him.

"NONONONONONONO!" Kid screeched. Everyone held him down and turned out one of his pockets, making him unsymmetrical.

"I DESERVE TO DIEEEEE!" Kid cried. Through his tears he managed to dare Tsubaki to eat a piece of toilet paper. Then Tsubaki dared Patty to drink ketchup. Then Patty dared Liz to flash someone through the apartment window. Then it was Liz's turn to ask Soul.

"Soul, truth or dare?" Liz asked.

"Truth." Everyone groaned again.

"Is it true you like Maka?"

"Of course I like her, she's my partner," he said, imitating what Maka said earlier. Maka gave him an evil glare.

After a few more rounds of Truth or Dare they decided to play a different game: Seven Minutes of Heaven. Tsubaki took six tooth picks and broke two of them in half, putting them all in her hand so they all looked the same length. Everyone drew a toothpick. The results were Soul and Maka. Everyone shoved them into their closet and locked the door with the lights off.

Ohmigoshohmigoshohmigosh… Wait… Soul's not even my boyfriend… I doubt he even likes me and my tiny boobs… There's no way… He's too cool for me… Maka thought.

They tried to give each other space, but it was no use. They had shoved Maka in the closet first. She had still been facing out when they shoved Soul as he faced towards the closet; forcing them to be pinned against each other; face-to face, chest-to-chest, body-to-body.

Both their bodies were tense and neither of them spoke, not sure what to say. Maka couldn't help but take in his scent. He smelled so good. She felt his chest go up and down against hers and listened to his heartbeat. The only other thing audible was their slow breathing in the dark, crammed room.

They both waited for what seemed like definitely more than 7 minutes when they realized they weren't opening the door. Maka rested her face against Soul's chest.

"They aren't gonna open it… Are they…?" she asked, though it was more of a statement.

"No… I don't mind though…" Soul spoke softly. Maka shrank back as much as she could, which was barely nothing at all. She felt her whole body go hot and her heart race even faster than it already was. Her throat tightened and her stomach churned.

"Wha-… What do you mean?" she dared to asked, her voice a whisper. Soul took this opportunity. He had been waiting for so long, but had long since grown tired of ignoring his own feelings. He slowly wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her towards him.

"I like you, Maka… I'm tired of being stupid and patient," he spoke into her ear. Maka felt her eyes begin to burn. She gently folded her arms around Soul's neck.

"I… I like you, too," she mumbled as they both shrank down to the floor, sitting in each other's embrace uncomfortably. Maka curled her face into his shoulder blade and relaxed the slightest bit.

"So… Is this 7 Minutes of Heaven?" Soul asked, trying to break a little joke.

"Definitely more than 7," Maka answered, snuggling closer to Soul as he held her tighter.

Maka looked up at where Soul's face should have been, since she couldn't tell in the dark. Through the darkness she could feel him looking back at her with his deep red eyes. She felt their faces get closer. They hesitated. The vibe in the room was intense, but their longings were even more powerful. Soul pressed his lips to Maka's gently, passionately kissing her. The rest on the night lulled along and the two, now more than partners, spent the rest of the night in the dark, small closet.

Once it was finally morning it was BlackStar who opened the closet door.

"So, how was it, Soul?" BlackStar asked, a huge grin on his face.

"MAKA-CHOP!" Maka screamed as he chopped BlackStar into the next dimension. Maka headed to her room, passing Tsubaki as she did and smiled slightly at her. Tsubaki smiled back and let out the slightest laugh.

…Some Heaven…
This is like kinda a request from [link] but i originally requested her this idea and she wrote it very well but then i got another idea for it so i also wrote my idea of it XD

I had a lot of fun writing this and i hope you guys enjoy it :D

PLZ PLZ PLZ COMMENT! I APPRECIATE IT!

I AM TAKING REQUESTS/COMMISIONS

I don't own Soul Eater in any way, shape, or form.
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MakaEvans1122 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
please draw another one PLEASE!!!!!!!!! :squee: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles  OR I MAY DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Someone called an ambulance! Someone called an ambulance!  (MY REQUEST IS THAT YOU WRITE ABOUT SOUL & MAKA GETTING MARRIED )
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LucyDragneel89 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
CUUUUUUUUUUUTE
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LeaValdez Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D'AWWWW!!!! So cute!! I love it make more!
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otakudreams139 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
XD XD XD XD XD
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ScourgeNinjaWarrior Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OwO what happens next...I GATZTA KNOW!!!!
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TwentySevenBucks Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more I NEED MORE ITS SO GOOD THANKYOU FOR MAKING THIS BUT I NEED MORE SOMA FOREVER
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1Nalufan Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
more more more more more more more I neeed moooore?????? plz??????????!!!
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Fhyrr Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student General Artist
So beautiful.
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banana-c00kie Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
i'd love to be shoved in a closet with soul >:)
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Radcoon Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
☺I knew it
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HazelXAnimeXZelda Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice :)
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SoMa4life15 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Nice I love it =)
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Inuyasha476 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
so cute
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Ccry-The-Cat Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013   Writer
Adorable <3
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dublith Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
1 WORD. AWESOME. It's just so descriptive that it paint a picture in your head. Loved all of it. :)
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PandaaChuu Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student General Artist
I LOVE IT!!!!
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RinRin11 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
XDDDDDD That was amusing... Oh BlackStar you'll never change!!!
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Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner May 30, 2013   General Artist
:D This was amusing
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ishoulbestudying Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
It was very good! i had a lot of fun reading it! It made my day! :D
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mioz1597 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow amazing story
i love it♥
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killerSpazball Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Omigosh, it is SO RARE to find good fanfiction of this ship
;u; Thank you for this
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^_^ There's more in my gallery
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o0-MomoPotato-0o Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
Is it poshibubble for you to do a reader insert? Lots of people love them, and I think it would be cool >*<
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure what a reader insert is... could you explain? :3
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o0-MomoPotato-0o Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
It's where you make up a storyline, but instead of putting in the persons name in witch the perspective is, you leave it blank or have an underline, therefor allowing the reader to imagine what it would actually feel like to be in the instance.
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yeah I've read things like that before. Unfortunately, I don't really write fanfics all that much anymore ^_^'
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o0-MomoPotato-0o Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Lol, yea. Just saw your page!

Ahaha... Captin jack sparrow XD
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davidtennantrocks Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Must... read... more...
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:iconloveloveplz:
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Blackfoxrock Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG i nerly died from reading that i was like oo this is good then just wow O///O i would die if that happind to me and a guy i liked
its a good story i LOVE it
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kitkatKMH26 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
completley agreed
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Blackfoxrock Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
lol
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witchblairsouleater Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
i luzed this!!! make a 2nd one to this plzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!! <3
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mylifesucksgetoverit Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
god this was hilarious loved especially what maka dared black star
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sagederp Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
may i make a request for Maka and Kid? i always thought they would look cute together ~
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sagederp Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my god. I JUST READ MY VERY 1ST FANFIC :iconinloveplz:
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i'm glad my fanfic was your first ^_^
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sagederp Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
.3.
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FollowingStars Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can't see this...but... I'm slow clapping right now. :iconclapplz:

You wrote their characters so well, I absolutely loved it!
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks XD :heart: I have more SoMa in my gallery if your interested ;3
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FollowingStars Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll have a look, thanks!
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Gmodman1 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Wuved it.
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yukimoive Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
i loved it
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anime-insanity44 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012   Writer
Thanks!!..Thats was so great
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AnimeGirl105 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, you have satisfied my SoMa fan needs!!!! :)
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Ichirukilovur Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I can sooooooooo see this happening great job!!!!!!
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks XD
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wolfgirlspiritsolf Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i can see it to i totally ship SoMa
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cturcz1234 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lulz XD
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SarinlaTheKiller Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
I can see this happening in the show:)
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